Topic 2: Community

Write an essay (150 – 300 words) about this topic:

More developing countries are given aid from international organizations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

 

In my opinion, I think practical aid and advice are more important than financial aid. Here are the reasons to support my opinion in order to make it more clearly and easier to understand.

Firstly, financial aid such as money is important because it helps developing countries have more chances to upgrade their countries, make their countries become a developed country. Nowadays, some developing countries are given financial aid from international organizations and this helps them a lot in developing their countries, we can see they use those aids to develop their countries easily and effectively, as a result, some of the countries have become developed countries. So financial aid is very important for developing countries.

Secondly, practical aid and advice are more important than financial aid. Although practical aid takes more time to conduct, practical aid shows a long term solution for countries which faced with poverty. Financial aid is only a short term solution for those developing countries. Countries that are given financial aid might have used all of those aids after a couple of years and they will soon need more. Practical aid or advice will make people in those countries aware of their problems and solve them by themselves. If their countries face to poverty again, they will know how to resolve it because they have already solved it before. This brings good effects to people who are living in developing countries.

In conclusion, I think financial aid is important but only for a specific time. Practical aid and advice are more important than financial aid because they make sure that people in developing countries will not let their countries face to poverty again.

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